More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals.

What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?
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It is undisputable fact that these days the majority of families prefer to consume more junk
food
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rather than homemade meals. There are numerous factors, which are causing
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problem: beginning
from
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laziness and ending
to
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addiction to
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type of
food
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. Despite
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,
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issue has
a
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several ways of
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solutions
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.
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the following paragraphs.
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with, laziness is considered
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the first and main
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reason
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of
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excessive consumption of fast
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, because a large number of adults work from morning to evening.
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, close to the evening, being exhausted from
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their job
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job
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jobs
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, they have
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willing to cook at home, as long as there are a lot of cafés,
restaurants
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and restaurants
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, which work with delivery service. So, from their
points
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of view, it is easier to order a pizza or sushi than spend an hour in front of
kitchen
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the kitchen
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stove.
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,
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the
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survey of sociologists
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Kazakhstan, which was conducted in 2020, about 85% of respondents chose to have a meal outside or use a delivery service. Another reason
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overconsuming
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junk
food
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is
a
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the
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multiple choice and accessibility of
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product in every corner of the major cities.
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,
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leads to other causes,
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as a plenty number of advertisements and addiction to
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food
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. To illustrate,
due to
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the Christmas ads of the “Coca-Cola” company, each year at that period of time a lot of people purchase
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soda drink. So, how can
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issue be solved?
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, authorities ought to regulate
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question.
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, they should cut the
quantity
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number
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of establishments, which provide citizens
unhealthy
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with unhealthy
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food
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.
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, governments need to raise an income tax for
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type of
food
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.
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, educators ought to give children proper
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about healthy and Junk
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. To give more information about its
affects
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to
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the
human’s
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organism and organize
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teambuilding, where children can plant vegetables or fruits with their teachers.
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, it is evident that day by day the number of fast
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consumers is increasing and it has several reasons. If
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follow certain steps, governments are able to solve
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issue and can create a generation that follows a healthy lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • On-the-go lifestyle
  • Nutritional value
  • Home-cooked
  • Health consequences
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Meal prep
  • Time management
  • Culinary skills
  • Processed foods
  • Dietary habits
  • Food marketing
  • Value meals
  • Economic factors
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Cultural shifts
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