The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
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The given chart illustrates the number of
hours
people spent on their leisure
activities in a week from 1998 to 1999. The data is divided into gender and employment status.
Taking a closer look at the graph, one can see both unemployed genders spent the most leisure
time
, 85 hours
and 79 hours
, respectively. Retired men invested a similar amount of time
in leisure
activities, 83 hours
, but those women spent the same time
as unemployed women, 79 hours
.
In contrast
, men who were housewives and were recruited from part-time
positions enjoyed zero leisure
hours
. In contrast
, female housewives use 50 hours
a week, which was higher than women working a part-time
job(40 hours
).
Overall
, it is true that men in each employment status usually spent much leisure
time
, except for two categories.Submitted by eunbi_0915 on
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