The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of unhealthy nutrition supplements in three general meals consumed in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that people consume more sodium
and saturated fat in their dinner, while
they eat sugar contained items with their snacks. Moreover
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, the proportion of sodium
is equally distributed in breakfast and snacks which made up 14%, while
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sodium
and saturated fat by 43% and 37%, respectively. Moreover
, breakfast contains the same rate of added sugar and saturated fat which is 16%, however
, these nutrition supplements in the snacks made up 42% and 21%, respectively.
On the other hand
, added sugar incorporates with dinner which is accounted for 23%, while
for lunch it makes 19%.Submitted by ravshankhasanov99 on
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