The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar charts compare the proportion of
people
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living in three types of regions, namely cities, towns and rural
areas
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, in 1995 and 2010. It gives more detail by
further
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classifying
people
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into those born in
Australia
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and those born outside
Australia
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as well.
It is clear that
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after 15 years, the percentages of both types of the population living in cities increased,
while
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there were far fewer residents who chose to live in rural
areas
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. In 1995, approximately 50% of Australian-born
people
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and 60% of
people
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born outside
Australia
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lived in cities.
However
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, about 30 % and 40 % of
people
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still chose rural
areas
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as their residential locations. The figures for those living in towns were 20% and 10% respectively. 2010 saw an apparent rise in the ratio of urban residents, with an increase of around 15 % for those born in
Australia
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and 20 % for those born outside
Australia
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.
By contrast
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, the figure for those living in rural
areas
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dropped sharply to just more or less than 10%. The proportion of
people
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living in towns
also
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declined slightly.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, areas, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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