The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar charts compare the proportion of
people
living in three types of regions, namely cities, towns and rural Use synonyms
areas
, in 1995 and 2010. It gives more detail by Use synonyms
further
classifying Linking Words
people
into those born in Use synonyms
Australia
and those born outside Use synonyms
Australia
as well.
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It is clear that
after 15 years, the percentages of both types of the population living in cities increased, Linking Words
while
there were far fewer residents who chose to live in rural Linking Words
areas
.
In 1995, approximately 50% of Australian-born Use synonyms
people
and 60% of Use synonyms
people
born outside Use synonyms
Australia
lived in cities. Use synonyms
However
, about 30 % and 40 % of Linking Words
people
still chose rural Use synonyms
areas
as their residential locations. The figures for those living in towns were 20% and 10% respectively.
2010 saw an apparent rise in the ratio of urban residents, with an increase of around 15 % for those born in Use synonyms
Australia
and 20 % for those born outside Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the figure for those living in rural Linking Words
areas
dropped sharply to just more or less than 10%. The proportion of Use synonyms
people
living in towns Use synonyms
also
declined slightly.Linking Words
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