The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030

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The line chart depicts the history

as well as

the estimation of annual

energy

consumption commencing from 1980 and ending in 2030 in the united states of America,

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that petrol and oil

energy

are more consumed throughout the given period compared to nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower

energy

, Glancing at the line chart reveals that petrol and oil

energy

was the first demanded source of

energy

and will remain the top one, between 1980 and 1995 showed a slight up-downs and upwards, right

after

this

year, a gradual increase started with roughly 35

quadrillions

till 2020, afterwards the consumption will illustrate a continuous rise till 2030 to reach exactly 50

quadrillions

, in the meanwhile the three sources of

energy

such

as Nuclear, solar, and hydropower were the least consumed with nearly 5

quadrillions

in 1980

however

, the estimation shows a fractional uplift throughout the projection ,

whereas

, the coal and natural gas came in the second stage, in the contrast, the coal

energy

showed a considerable increase from 1980 with just above 15

quadrillions

to reach its peak in 2030 with exactly 30

quadrillions

while

natural gas will consent a steady rate between 2010 and 2030 with 20

quadrillions

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