According to most projections, the world’s population will continue to rise, until it plateaus at 9 to 11 billion in the latter part of the 21st century. Without a doubt, population growth represents the largest problem facing humanity at present. Do you agree that this is the greatest issue faced by us today?

In the present era, the
population
of the globe is increasing at a vast
rate
.
Although
, some
people
agree with the notion that raising
rate
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of the
people
is harmful
for
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mankind's survival.
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others reject the statement. In my opinion, as the
rate
of communities is getting higher so,
this
is going have
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poor effect on the surrounding in the upcoming future.
Hence
, I will explain the reasons behind
this
mense in upcoming paragraphs and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
To begin
with, there
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a myriad of reasons to support the statement but the most preponderant one is that as more bodies inhale in society so, there raises a situation of high demand
rate
for basic goods. As the production of food, clothes, houses and other basic necessities is not able to fulfil the wants of the increased
population
thus
, the
country
gets hit by the state of poverty.
For instance
, nations like
India
are badly affected by problems of poverty
due to
the high
rate
of
people
leaving the
country
hence
, the economic development of
India
is affected badly. Moving towards the next reason, birth rates should be controlled effectively because if there will be more
people
consuming the goods
then
the government is going to fail in meeting their demands including health care and educational facilities. Though the
country
might need to deal with the issue of inflation where not only daily needs but
also
medical treatment is going be out of the hands of common
people
.
Such
as the rising
rate
of bodies in Shri Lanka made the
country
went under the debit of $1,00,00,000 in the past 20 years. So, the growing
population
needs to be controlled immediately. Moving towards
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the remedies to solve the trouble and the prominent one is that birth rates need to be limited.
Such
as countries like
India
, parents are not allowed to have more than two kids as having a third child in
India
is not legally accepted and if they do so, they need to face
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legislation in the courts. I think
this
is really a good step by the Indian rule that has helped them to eliminate the problems of below-poverty-line communities.
Furthermore
, a seminar needs to be held to make society aware of the disruptive effects of the high
population
on living.
Therefore
,
people
should be able to save themselves from the poor medical conditions and high-priced basic goods of their daily use.
To conclude
,
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the adverse effects of the problem on humans aforementioned above, one should follow the given solutions to decrease the effect of the issue on the globe.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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