The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010
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The picture illustrates the changes in the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.
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, it can be seen from the diagram that there was
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significant development on the island for many purposes.
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, with some new buildings and constructions, it allowed the locals to access the convenience of life. First of all, the village was changed dramatically with the expansion of some new roads in the East of the
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to help the inhabitant move easily. The Tea Room and the Sand Dunes were transformed into some amenities
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as a Hotel, Restaurant, Book club and Retirement village which were located to the left of the River.
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, Holiday Cottages, which was built in the South-West of the
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, was relocated to the South-East of the
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and opposite the East Bank through the newly erected road. From the North-West of the
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, there was the
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from Woodland to Golf Course.
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, Marsh was eliminated to construct Permanent Houses.
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, East Bank was the only building to be conserved after 3 decades.
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