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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table furnishes a comprehensive view of
China
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,
India
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, and the
USA
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, presenting their
population
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 statistics,
population
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growth
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, density,
land
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area
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, and urbanization in 2021.
Overall
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,
China
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 emerges as the most populous country with a considerable
land
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area
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, yet it records the lowest
growth
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rate
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 and
population
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 density.
India
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,
on the other hand
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, boasts of a higher
growth
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rate
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 and density but a smaller
land
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area
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. The
USA
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 trails behind
China
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 and
India
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 in
population
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 and
land
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area
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, but it has the highest urbanization
rate
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. In terms of
population
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,
China
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 has the highest number of people, totalling 1.415 billion, closely followed by
India
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 with 1.354 billion,
while
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 the
USA
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's
population
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 stands at 327
million
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. Concerning
population
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growth
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,
India
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 has the highest
growth
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rate
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 of +1.11%, followed by the
USA
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 at +0.71%, and
China
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 at the lowest
growth
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rate
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 of +0.39%. Considering the
population
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 concentration,
India
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 has the most crowded
population
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 of the three countries, with 455 individuals residing in each
square
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 kilometre, followed by
China
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 with 151 people and the
USA
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 with 36. Comparing
land
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area
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,
China
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 has the largest expanse of 9.388
million
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square
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 kilometres, followed by the
USA
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 with 9.147
million
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square
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 kilometres,
while
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India
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's
land
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area
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 is comparatively smaller at 2.973
million
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square
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 kilometres. As for urbanization, the
USA
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 leads with the highest urban
population
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 at 83%, followed by
China
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 at 58%, and
India
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 at 32%. It is worth noting that
China
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 and
India
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 have a higher percentage of rural populations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, usa, population, growth, land, area, rate, million, square with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age distribution
  • urbanization
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • healthcare accessibility
  • literacy rate
  • educational attainment
  • demographic trends
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic factors
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