Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world,subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is an essential part

for

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human life since there are lots of impacts to

educate

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generations. Some people argue that

history

is one of the most valuable school

courses

.

Otherwise

, others assume that

,

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these days,

courses

such

as

science

and

technology

are more mandatory than

History

. Before choosing a subject whether social

science

such

as

history

or applied

science

such

as

science

and

technology

, parents tend to use

their

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implication

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of the

courses

that their children may take.

For example

, if

science

and

technology

courses

could have a good deal of job vacancies after their children graduated, the parent’s suggestion would be on that course.

On the other hand

, parents are likely to say that

history

is

the

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most important subject than

science

and

technology

because in that subject there is lots of evidence that could be proved from a long time ago to these days. From that case, we can find out which solutions fit our problems. A long time goes by, we can reflect and take

it

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into account

from

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the predecessor to our condition and make a new step for the next generation.

To sum up

, in my point of view, both social

science

and applied

science

have the same proportion to support the

future’s

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generation. From

history

, we can become agents of change because we learn

lots

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from the past towards now. But,

science

and

technology

have a huge importance as well, because from those subjects we can implement the new ideas that we have learned.