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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil, and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. Agree or disagree?

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There is a school of thought that assumes the
cost
 of renewable
energy
 sources is unaffordable for the general public at the same time, it is not easy to change our main sources of
energy
, which are fossil fuels, used in cities and transportation into natural alternatives. From a general perspective
of
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mine
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, I agree with
this
 idea
due to
 the high
cost
 and its
complication
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 to generate. First and foremost, the high
cost
 to run for a natural source of
energy
 development is notable. To illustrate, these kinds of alternative
energy
 take tremendous effort to exploit and generate. In fact, it requires sets of modern technology to take it into
use
 which can only be purchased for an amount of money.
Besides
, it is necessary to keep track of it consistently, leading to more monetary
use
.
For example
, solar panels need checking and superseding after a short time which encourages a fountain to make it happen in public.
Additionally
, the notion of fossil fuel replacement on a larger scale is not available because of the limitation of natural power compared to traditional power. Significantly, the demand for
energy
 in metropolises is always at a rate; alternatives limited by natural elements seem impossible to replace
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.
Furthermore
, people can
use
 fossil fuels at
lowers
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 prices, so
there
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it
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 is not worth spending more money to
use
 extravagant environmentally friendly natural power, which necessitates
further
 finance and time to organize. In conclusion, despite the fact that people’s awareness of pollution and its detrimental effects on the environment; it is not realistic to convert fossil fuels to renewable
energy
 because of its high
cost
 and demanding requirements to generate.
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Grammar and Sentence Structure
Check for subject-verb agreement and use of appropriate verb tenses.
Content Development
Include a more balanced argument by addressing counterarguments and potential benefits of renewable energy sources.

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