The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

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The diagram gives detailed information about the collection of rainwater and how it is being processed for drinking in a town in Australia.
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, it is observed that after collection, the
water
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undergoes filtration and other processes before it is sent back to be used in the households.
To begin
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, when it rains,
water
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gets into the gutter, flows into and through the drain to various houses
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town ,
then
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is filtered by a
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filter ,
then
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it is sent into a storage tank, which acts as a reservoir.
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, the
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is sent for treatment .chemicals are introduced into the tank to treat the
water
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to make it safe for use, and
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, the treated
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is redistributed into the houses, where it can be used. Individuals can access the
water
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by turning on their taps.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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