The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram gives detailed information about the collection of rainwater and how it is being processed for drinking in a town in Australia.
Overall
, it is observed that after collection, the Linking Words
water
undergoes filtration and other processes before it is sent back to be used in the households.
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To begin
, when it rains, Linking Words
water
gets into the gutter, flows into and through the drain to various houses Use synonyms
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is filtered by a Linking Words
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it is sent into a storage tank, which acts as a reservoir.
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, the Linking Words
water
is sent for treatment .chemicals are introduced into the tank to treat the Use synonyms
water
to make it safe for use, and Use synonyms
finally
, the treated Linking Words
water
is redistributed into the houses, where it can be used. Individuals can access the Use synonyms
water
by turning on their taps.Use synonyms
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