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You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing a letter to tell you
a
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 feedback from my participants of
meeting
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the meeting
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 for the Earth in your hotel. It was
really
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preasure
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pleasure
 time for us. I appreciate
for
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it.
Overall
 many participants like your hotel and services. especially
condition
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 of the furniture and comfortable bed.
Also
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air
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 conditioning system worked so well.
However
, some people were not satisfied
about
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 the food for lunch. I think
temperature
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the temperature
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 of
soup
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 was not good and it was not enough served for everyone.
Furthemore
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, beverages were not prepared after
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a meal
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meal
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. As you know, I always believe
your
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 service for customer satisfaction. So I want to suggest that take enough time to prepare everything to reduce those mistakes. I understand that you already do your best to make perfect service for visitors. I hope you understand
this
 feedback and make better food next time. Thank you.
your
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 sincerely Hera.
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