The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict some differences in Pebbleton village between 20 years before and now. In general, there are more facilities and houses in recent times than 20 years ago. Looking at the first map for more detail, on the Northwestern, a lighthouse and an old fort were built.
Moreover
, there are several households
at the end
of
the
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Lighthouse Lane
on
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the North area. Looking at the West side, a film studio located next to the sea and the playing field was alongside the Old Fort
road
.
Besides
, there was a school situated
in
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the Coast
road
which was near the river and a
road
bridge passed through.
Furthermore
, there were various green areas in
this
village. After a 20-year period, several changes had been taken. On the North side, the Old Fort was converted into a playground for offspring. A community centre was added and some tennis courts were built in front of
this
centre.
Moreover
, there was an expansion of the inhabitants led to an increase in accommodation in Pebbleton village.
While
the film studio was replaced by flats and the introduction of
the
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Foot Path which was opposite the school, the infrastructure for studying and the
road
bridge remained unchanged.
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