The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate four retail sectors which are clothing , groceries , electronic appliances and home
items
sales
on online platforms in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2005 , the ratio of clothing sales
was the highest as compared to other sectors. While
, after five years demand for electronic items
increased. However
, clothing sales
fell and reached more than half.
To begin
with, the sales
of clothing were 38% which was the highest percentage of sales
in the online market in 2005 . Whereas
, in 2010 the ratio decreased and reached 22%. Moreover
, home and kitchen items
were the second highest positions with 29%. While
the figure showed that home and kitchen items
sold were only 11% which was the lowest percentage of sales
as compared to other retail sectors in 2010.
However
, the percentage of online sales
in electric appliances was 19% in 2005. While
it increased drastically to 25% and reached 45% of the total . In addition
, the sales
of groceries were 14% and 22% in the years 2005 and 2010 respectively.Submitted by jeetkacha13 on
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