The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in

the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons where

relevant.
The pie charts illustrate four retail sectors which are clothing , groceries , electronic appliances and home
items
sales
on online platforms in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2005 , the ratio of clothing
sales
was the highest as compared to other sectors.
While
, after five years demand for electronic
items
increased.
However
, clothing
sales
fell and reached more than half.
To begin
with, the
sales
of clothing were 38% which was the highest percentage of
sales
in the online market in 2005 .
Whereas
, in 2010 the ratio decreased and reached 22%.
Moreover
, home and kitchen
items
were the second highest positions with 29%.
While
the figure showed that home and kitchen
items
sold were only 11% which was the lowest percentage of
sales
as compared to other retail sectors in 2010.
However
, the percentage of online
sales
in electric appliances was 19% in 2005.
While
it increased drastically to 25% and reached 45% of the total .
In addition
, the
sales
of groceries were 14% and 22% in the years 2005 and 2010 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words items, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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