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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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 maps show the existing state of a university
sports
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 facility and some of the adjustments that have been suggested. In general, the proposal calls for building out both sides of the complex and adding a few amenities, including a leisure
pool
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, a café, a
sports
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 store, and dancing studios. The outdoor court on the west
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 of the
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 facility will be replaced with a leisure swimming
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, which will have direct access to a brand-new dressing room on the extreme
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 corner of the structure.
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, the lobby will be enlarged, and a
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 store will be established close to the changing area. The complex's central 25-meter
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 will stay just as it is. The reception, changing area, and sitting layout surrounding the
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 not alter. The outdoor courts to the east of the centre will be eliminated to create room for new facilities, as seen on the east
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 of the map. In the extreme
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southeast
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, the concept calls for building a second changing room connected to a brand-new café that will debut beside the new
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 hall.
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, two dance studios will be constructed
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 by
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 close to the
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 hall, one of which will be next to the recently expanded gym
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