Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?
Due to
fast technical development atomic energy
is becoming more and more popular. However
, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on Earth at risk. I do not think so. My take on this
is that nuclear energy
is not only safe for humanity, but also
it is environmentally friendly.
Firstly
, it is much safer than most of society thinks. For instance
, everyone around the world has heard about the explosion at Chornobyl's nuclear station, but it is only one of all the stations. Moreover
, this
explosion made scientists think about the risks and improve the technology to be safer. So, there is no point to be
afraid of nuclear Change preposition
in being
energy
and suppose that it can turn our Earth to ashes.
Secondly
, it is not only harmless to the environment, but also
it is the most effective way of producing energy
. For example
, the technology of producing energy
out of coal is less effective and affects harmfully on nature. While atomic
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Atomic
energy
is almost fully environmentally friendly and one nuclear station can produce a
twice bigger amount of Correct article usage
apply
energy
than the
coal one. In Correct article usage
a
foreseeable
future, atomic Correct article usage
the foreseeable
energy
might be a perfect replacement for coal energy
.
In a nutshell, nuclear technologies are developing every day and becoming less harmful and more effective every day. If there have
not been some accidents with it, we would not Wrong verb form
had
reach
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have reached
such
a massive upgrade in the technology. And there is no doubt that someday it will fully replace the old traditional sources of energy
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