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Many people believe that formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examination?

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Some assume that conventional
tests
 are not the most excellent way of evaluating educational
approach
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. It seems to be that official
tests
 are becoming extinct, and I will explain why in
this
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Firstly
, formal
tests
 increase the possibility of cheating among
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students
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student
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students
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. Academic dishonesty happens more often in these
tests
 and causes educational competence is not evaluated correctly.
For example
,
if
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 formal test
that is
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pen
 and
paper
, a student can cheat and get the same score as another student who has studied more. A second negative factor is the lack of adjustment of pupils to the traditional examinations.
Due to
 the progression of technology,
people
 are more comfortable
to use
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 modern gadgets.
For instance
, students are more relaxed and satisfied if they take the test with a tablet
instead
 of conventional exams
such
 as
pen
 and
paper
. with
this
 method,
people
 who participate in the exam are evaluated in an equal condition.
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 third case, formal
tests
 make students memorize
instead
 of using more
of
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creativity.
Moreover
, if oral exams to held, the scientific ability of
people
 can be measured better because they cannot show their full ability in official and written
tests
 that are taken with
pen
 and
paper
. It is true that there
is
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may be
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 positive to formal exams, most notably some believe that these
tests
 allow participants to be evaluated within a specific framework. Despite
this
, official
tests
 often have a fixed framework and are predictable and cannot be a suitable standard for evaluation.
To conclude
, feasibility cheat, failure to adapt to the advancement of technology and the modern world, and
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 of showing the full ability of
people
 are reasons that
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formal
pen
 and
paper
 examinations are not
the
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 good way of estimating educational effort.
This
 is not to say that these methods are not the best way of evaluating, but these
tests
 can be anticipated.
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