In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, there are more and more students which are highly qualified
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are not under contract.
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society and particularly for young adults that doing
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to be ready for
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world. In my opinion, there are factors that can explain
this
complex situation like
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determination, motivation and
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subjects.
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, it is commonly believed that these students are perhaps not looking
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a job. Most
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graduates
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have the willingness to learn about different cultures and want to discover the world.
After
this
step, some of them have difficulties
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back
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reality.
For example
, at a job interview, it will be hardest for travellers to show their motivation and determination than a recent graduate.
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, the rate of employment depends on the subject. Some
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not a lot of opportunity as compared to
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one. It is argued to believe that when you choose your
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future perspectives. To illustrate, some subjects will be less and less useful in the next years
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evolution. Many jobs will be
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and companies will not search
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humans
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capacities. It will be cheaper for them to use new technology. In conclusion, it's a big part of life to make the choice of
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before it and after of course. Your future job will be influenced by important decisions like that. When you decide
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