• Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Nowadays , there are two types of mindset , the individual who thinks only about

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and career to reach in the future as much high salary they can .

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there is a small piece of the population who doesn’t care about foolish material wealth,

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they evaluate

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as the most important value , indeed a high wage with long hours cannot give you as much

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as you like ,

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, you are going to lose it with that type of choice . based on

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evidence , I am feeling closer to the second part of

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's thought . Over

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, our

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has grown new generation with the purpose to stock in their mind that the value of

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is higher than other types of principles.

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type of view, in my opinion, has led the human mind to concentrate just on a

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and miss leisure

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, youth starts to have more anxiety , feeling under pressure by

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if they don’t reach on

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some goal usually related on

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successful , the

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makes you feel a loser .

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, in the

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ten ,years the percentage of human suicide increased , it was related to economic issues because of the thought that a good

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with a high salary means a successful person .

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, folks struggling themselves on it avoiding taking their

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, which causes mental health destruction .

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ruined the new generation .

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explanation is clear my view , I prefer to have a lower paying

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and focus on myself and spending my

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doing things I love and feeling alive ,

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of staying 24h per day in an office , saving

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for my future life which it would be unhappy and lack of human relationship

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the absence of

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. In light of that ,

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family and friends are more important than whatever

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or salary .

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should be only a means to live not the main purpose of human life.