The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
This
bar chart shows in comparison how people in a European city travel to work which are Linking Words
bus
, Use synonyms
car
, Use synonyms
bike
and Use synonyms
foot
in certain years 1960, 1980 and 2000.
First of all, Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
foot
was the most popular way of going to work in the 60sUse synonyms
,
and follows by Remove the comma
apply
bike
, Use synonyms
bus
and Use synonyms
car
to go down because walking got around 33%, the Use synonyms
bike
had 21% Use synonyms
furthermore
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Use synonyms
bus
was 18% and 6% for the Correct article usage
the bus
car
.
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Secondly
, despite the past year, the Linking Words
bus
got the highest percentage of all in the 80s and went Use synonyms
car
, Use synonyms
bike
and Use synonyms
lastly
Linking Words
foot
. Let's start with the Use synonyms
bus
which was 26%, the second was cars 23%, the third was the Use synonyms
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bike
20% and the Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
last
was the Linking Words
foot
17%. It dramatically changed compared to 1960.
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Lastly
, In 2000, Linking Words
start
from top to Wrong verb form
starting
last
went by Linking Words
the
Remove the article
apply
car
, Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
bus
, Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
foot
and Use synonyms
bike
. the Use synonyms
car
got 36% which was the highest ranking of all those years, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, the Linking Words
bike
was only 6% which Use synonyms
the
most unusable way of transmission of all.Add a missing verb
is the
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, lastly".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, car, bike, foot with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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