The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate the structure of a
wave-energy
machine
and how it works, and
placement
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its placement
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in the sea.
Overall
,
basically
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the
machine
is fully operated by the
water
force, and it is divided into two chambers the lower level which received the wave and the upper where the engine is.
While
it has two options to position a
wave-energy
machine
in the
water
either near or
further
to the beach but the cost varies. The first picture shows the physical image of a
wave-energy
machine
and
functionality
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its functionality
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,
then
subdivided into two parts;
first,
the bottom area where the
water
inlet can be found
which
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apply
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is facing the wave direction.
Then
, the top area where the turbine is located which connected to a generator that produces electricity. Interestingly, in the middle and topmost it has openings that the air can flow in and out that act as energy to push the turbine to working a state. Turning to the next image is the location of the
machine
in the
water
. When a
wave-energy
machine
is placed on the seaside there will be a probability that it will receive small waves that result in low output,
although
the installation cost is cheaper.
Whereas
, placing it in the deeper areas though pricey, albeit the high chances of receiving large waves is higher with high energy output.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wave-energy, machine, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 4 times.
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