the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status

A glance at the graph provided reveals information about how the amount of spare

time

was spent by males and females of five categories of employment status between 1998 and 1999. As can be clearly seen from the bar chart

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men enjoyed more

hours

of free

time

during a week than women in three out of five categories.

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,there were two statuses in which females were more

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than males

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part-

time

employed and housewives. Gentlemen who were in a full-

time

employment class consumed more free

time

than ladies,with approximately 50

hours

each week,compared to around 38

hours

for girls. It is evident that

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population

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of both genders who are unemployed and retired experienced the most

time

of

breaktime

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the same results in two classifications for pensioner gentlemen and ladies and jobless just about 85 and 78

hours

of rest

time

during a period of seven days respectively. There were two groups where there is only information about women who were housekeepers and part-

time

employed utilized to about 50

hours

and less than 40

hours

respectively. In these

classes

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there is no data given about men