The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the planned changes to Norbiton industrial area in the future. There is a circular road in the middle of the Norbiton industrial field, surrounded by three factories now. But soon they will be removed and two additional lines will be added to extend the space to the north and the northwest.
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, two housings will be created towards the town and the others will be set up
along with
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the pathway across the river towards farmland. A few shops will be created in the southwest of the centre. There is another track extending to the east now alongside four factories and one factory
at the end
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of the road. In the future, it will be refurbished into a residential place with various living facilities. At the top of the housing, there will be a playgroup for entertainment. A school will be constructed
at the end
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of the road and a medical centre will be situated on the southeastern side of the central circular lane.
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, the major developments scheduled for Norbiton industrial area include the elimination of factories and the construction of housings, which will give rise to the subsequent changes in transportation, facilities and residential district.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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