The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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The figures illustrate the present centre of Isilp that

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small town has planned to develop in the future.

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, residential areas, community facilities, and infrastructure will be expanded and made up for service people in the area. In the present, in the north, there are many lots of shops on both sides of the main

road

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which one side of the shops is close to the countryside and the other side is next to the housing area. The housing area is wide and has a

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the southeast. The main

road

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has two alleys that are on the west and the east of the residential. The west

road

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can lead to a school to the southwest which dead end to another group of housing.

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the planned development, it can be seen that the new main

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will be built in a circle shape in order to be accessible to all establishments. The shop zone in the north will have areas for a bus station and a car

park

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, new housing will be constructed next to the car

park

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with the entrance connecting to the main

road

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. The old main

road

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will be replaced by a new walk for pedestrians only. The

park

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will be diminished in size and,

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the school will be a little bit renovated.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

222 words

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

you are applying for a job and need a refernce.Write a letter to the boss in your former job. In your letter : Give details of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your ex boss could put in the reference.

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.