The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives data on the
amount
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of minutes spent on phone calls and the category that the calls fall
in
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from 2001-2008 in Australia. From an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that the most prominent type is local and the least is mobile,
additionally
national is the median of both of these sorts with a middle number for every year.
Firstly
, as mentioned, the most dominant telephone call appears to be local
although
it started to decrease from its
all time
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high (90) in 2005 back down to its beginning number (72) in 2008.
On the contrary
to others,
local
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experienced a
downwards
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journey,
however
, because of its massive number at the start, it still stayed as the leader. The complete opposite of
this
are
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mobile phone calls,
nevertheless
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while
it did start with around 2 billion it still ended at a decent 46 which is a pretty similar ending in comparison with the other categories.
Secondly
, the remaining one is international telephone calls which steadily increased over the 9 years,
nonetheless
was not able to beat the leading sort by just 9 billion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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