The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives data on the
amount
of minutes spent on phone calls and the category that the calls fall Change the quantifier
number
in
from 2001-2008 in Australia. From an Change preposition
into
overall
perspective, it is apparent that the most prominent type is local and the least is mobile, additionally
national is the median of both of these sorts with a middle number for every year.
Firstly
, as mentioned, the most dominant telephone call appears to be local although
it started to decrease from its all time
high (90) in 2005 back down to its beginning number (72) in 2008. Add a hyphen
all-time
On the contrary
to others, local
experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
locals
downwards
journey, Change the word
downward
however
, because of its massive number at the start, it still stayed as the leader. The complete opposite of this
are
mobile phone calls, Change the verb form
is
nevertheless
Add a comma
,nevertheless
while
it did start with around 2 billion it still ended at a decent 46 which is a pretty similar ending in comparison with the other categories.
Secondly
, the remaining one is international telephone calls which steadily increased over the 9 years, nonetheless
was not able to beat the leading sort by just 9 billion.Submitted by a.fahradova on
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