As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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huge part of their life in their occupation place so,

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pleasure is a decisive factor to increase personal happiness. in

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essay, I intend to say the parameters of rising

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satisfaction

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by a lovely manager or a good wage .

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, it seems to me

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prospect is not realistic for all employees.

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, many commentators justifiably argue that there are several decisive factors that the

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well-being is able to rise at the workplace. first of all, The main element of

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satisfaction

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is the manager's behaviour with the employees. if the employer is an ethical person, the gladness of members of the workforce is highly likely to increase significantly because in that suppose usually the stress of

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decline.

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, salary is another important factor for all employers.

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of wage is a fundamental element to remain of

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satisfaction

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at a high level.

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, if a

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has a good wage, the ability of them to buy everything will stay upper than the standard of living.

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, It doesn't seem logical that all staff members remain satisfied. From a social perspective, In any company, there are several departments that have different salaries. it is

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maintained that

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of every position is different so the boss is unable to avoid different wages or exactly the quantity of comfort equally for all workers.

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, there are always people who are not satisfied with their jobs. in conclusion, it seems to me, the

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of salaries and managers functioning are decisive factors in

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stage of

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it is not stable for all staff.