You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting . Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting . In your letter •Describe the meeting •Explain the problems with the service •Suggest what the meeting organiser should do

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Hello Mr.George , I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention to the

non-satisfactory

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unsatisfactory

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service provided during our client meeting

this

morning , we had our meeting held in meeting hall no. 12 from 11 am to 12:30 pm . Our clients and I have made bookings for

one

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night

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one-night

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stay at your hotel for tonight .

This

meeting was a buying meeting wherein we had our very important client from Australia for shortlisting apparel and accessories range for their upcoming spring - summer season to showcase in their outlets and for e-commerce online sales as well . As you would imagine

this

meeting was related to fashion and the Mannequin which was the crucial factor for our meeting and was not provided as requested to you

while

scheduling our meeting .

In addition

, the lunch order which we made with very less spices , came in with a huge amount of red chilli quantity in it .

As a result

this

made our clients feel a bit uneasy and very hard to work,

thus

, it

leads

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us to a situation wherein we suffered massive losses for the whole season . I would want you to offer them a great dinner as a Gesture from our side and maybe a Discount voucher from the Hotel for their next visit ,

this

would maybe make them feel happy . Looking forward to your confirmation . Thanks and best regards , Maria Martin

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph addresses a specific point or idea clearly.

task achievement

Address the problems with the service in more detail and provide specific examples to support your claims.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

244 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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