You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting . Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting . In your letter •Describe the meeting •Explain the problems with the service •Suggest what the meeting organiser should do

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Hello Mr.George , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the

non-satisfactory

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service provided during our client meeting

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morning , we had our meeting held in meeting hall no. 12 from 11 am to 12:30 pm . Our clients and I have made bookings for

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night

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stay at your hotel for tonight .

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meeting was a buying meeting wherein we had our very important client from Australia for shortlisting apparel and accessories range for their upcoming spring - summer season to showcase in their outlets and for e-commerce online sales as well . As you would imagine

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meeting was related to fashion and the Mannequin which was the crucial factor for our meeting and was not provided as requested to you

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scheduling our meeting .

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, the lunch order which we made with very less spices , came in with a huge amount of red chilli quantity in it .

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made our clients feel a bit uneasy and very hard to work,

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, it

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us to a situation wherein we suffered massive losses for the whole season . I would want you to offer them a great dinner as a Gesture from our side and maybe a Discount voucher from the Hotel for their next visit ,

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would maybe make them feel happy . Looking forward to your confirmation . Thanks and best regards , Maria Martin

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph addresses a specific point or idea clearly.

task achievement

Address the problems with the service in more detail and provide specific examples to support your claims.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

244 words

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Many feel that going tp the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? It is a possible or negative development?

Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers