You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting . Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting . In your letter •Describe the meeting •Explain the problems with the service •Suggest what the meeting organiser should do

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Hello Mr.George , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the

non-satisfactory

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service provided during our client meeting

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morning , we had our meeting held in meeting hall no. 12 from 11 am to 12:30 pm . Our clients and I have made bookings for

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night

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stay at your hotel for tonight .

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meeting was a buying meeting wherein we had our very important client from Australia for shortlisting apparel and accessories range for their upcoming spring - summer season to showcase in their outlets and for e-commerce online sales as well . As you would imagine

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meeting was related to fashion and the Mannequin which was the crucial factor for our meeting and was not provided as requested to you

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scheduling our meeting .

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, the lunch order which we made with very less spices , came in with a huge amount of red chilli quantity in it .

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made our clients feel a bit uneasy and very hard to work,

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, it

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us to a situation wherein we suffered massive losses for the whole season . I would want you to offer them a great dinner as a Gesture from our side and maybe a Discount voucher from the Hotel for their next visit ,

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would maybe make them feel happy . Looking forward to your confirmation . Thanks and best regards , Maria Martin

nagpalgunika02Sun Apr 16 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph addresses a specific point or idea clearly.

task achievement

Address the problems with the service in more detail and provide specific examples to support your claims.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

244 words

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