The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The charts give information on the
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for water used for various intentions in six regions of the world.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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of industrial
use
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is the highest in North
America
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and
Europe
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,
while
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, in the other countries, the
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for agricultural
use
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is the highest. Looking at North
America
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and
Europe
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first,
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the
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for industrial
use
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is the highest, at 48% and 53% respectively, followed by agricultural
use
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and domestic
use
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in both regions. The
percentage
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of agricultural
use
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in North
America
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is 39%,
while
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that agricultural
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in
Europe
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is lower, at 32%.
However
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, the
percentage
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of domestic
use
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in North
America
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is 13%,
whereas
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that of domestic
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in
Europe
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is higher, at 15%. In terms of the other four charts, the
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of agricultural is the most used water. The
percentage
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of agricultural
use
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in South
America
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, Africa and South East
Asia
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is 71%, 84%, and 81% respectively,
while
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that of in Central
Asia
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is the highest among countries, at 88%.
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, the
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for domestic
use
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is 19% in
the
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South
America
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, followed by 9% in Africa, and 7% in both Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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. The
percentage
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of industrial
use
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is the lowest except
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South East
Asia
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, at 10% in South
America
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, 7% in Africa and 5% in Central
Asia
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respectively,
while
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at 12% in South East
Asia
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, percentage, use, america, europe, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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