The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#anthropology #graduates #university #courses #salaries #anthropologists #work #five #years #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The pie chart illustrates the portion of the Anthropology graduates from a particular university did after finishing their undergraduate degree,
while
the table demonstrates how much the salary gained, which is divided into 4 categories, by the Anthropology graduates in work after five years experience.
Linking Words
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that over half of the Bachelor of Anthropology belongs to full-time workers, Linking Words
while
the other types of occupation do not contribute as much to full-time workers. Linking Words
Moreover
, after five years of work, the highest income belongs to the government employees, but the smallest income is the freelance consultants and Linking Words
the
private companies.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, the full-time worker is the highest, which stands at 52%. Linking Words
However
, the others Linking Words
such
as full-time postgraduate study, part-time employee and postgrad study, part-time work, unemployed and not known constitute 8%, 5%, 15%, 12% and 8%.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, after the bachelor level experience in five years, half of the employees that paid above 100.000 Linking Words
dollars
are government employees, Use synonyms
whereas
the smallest gain is the private's occupations at one-third. Linking Words
Moreover
, from 75.000 Linking Words
dollars
to 100.000 Use synonyms
dollars
, the greatest gain belongs to freelance consultants at two-fifths, Use synonyms
while
the private labour sectors are the smallest at 25%. Linking Words
Additionally
, between 25.000 and 75.000 Linking Words
dollars
, the biggest salary belongs to the private sector at 45% and both remaining types of labour have the same composition which is 20.000 Use synonyms
dollars
each.Use synonyms
Submitted by mdelvega90 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼