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Many people believe that good social skills are important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Many people believe that good social skills are important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills To what extent do you agree/disagree?
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Many employers believe that an outstanding ability to easily connect with people plays a vital role in the workspace. In my opinion, there are two sides and I will outline the reasons in the following essay. First of all, firms are always trying to make their business profitable and social
skills
 are required for negotiating.
Hence
, those who are succeeded in communication may have a beneficial impact on the company. Especially, personal characteristics namely persuasive, easygoing, and communicative can affect all the relationships aspects with partners, and stakeholders.
Therefore
 consumers are more satisfied with the services and are likely to buy their products.
Secondly
, well-developed social
skills
 contribute to internal team relations and enhance
overall
 work effectiveness.
For instance
, if an emergency happens, only through an internal communication system, colleagues can inform each other fast, in order for problems to be carried out effectively. On the other side, I would agree that only social
abilitites
Correct your spelling
abilities
 can not be a factor to employ people. It is mainly because there are several jobs that do not ask for soft
skills
 rather than technical capabilities. Based on work ethics companies have no right to reject candidates who have social anxiety.
For example
 some engineering jobs are asking for knowledge in the field and operation system
skills
, which is important for the whole process and it allows one to have lower communication
skills
Furthermore
, everyone deserves to be considered equally and companies should hire people who meet exactly their main requirements and go through all the steps
To conclude
 I believe that both sides have merits,
nevertheless
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 everyone has to be treated equally and employed
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