Some governments spend a lot of money on exploring space. Some feel that this investment is justified while other think that money should be spent on public services like healthcare and education.

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investment in
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because
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the scope of science.
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understanding of our galaxy.
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humans have developed and discovered the unknown facts and places of our universe. it can not be possible without the support of the government and its resources.
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mankind gets benefits by understanding the
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space
. despite the given arguments, others including
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assert that
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money should be utilized in public welfare schemes.
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time as every country wants to dominate
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missions. to do so they spend
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orbit costs more than 50 million
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. developing nations will not get enough benefits from investments in
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system to grow in a better and fast way. in conclusion,
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space
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outer
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growing nations it is not worth spending as they have other primary issues to resolve.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological advancements
  • potential solutions
  • climate monitoring
  • disaster prediction
  • satellite communication
  • fostering international cooperation
  • improving the quality of life
  • reducing poverty
  • addressing immediate societal needs
  • allocating funds
  • advancements in space technology
  • long-term benefits
  • robust public services
  • partnerships with private companies
  • cost-sharing
  • preparing for future challenges
  • resource scarcity
  • present-day issues
  • affects daily life directly
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