The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate the percentages of
British
university students
who can use other languages besides
English in two different years
.
In general, it can be clearly seen that there was a rise in the proportion of second
and third
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third-language
language
speakers over a period of 10 years
and the majority of British
students
could speak at least one foreign
Language
in the
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years
.
According to
the charts, the proportion of British
students
who spoke a second
and third language
was 80%, whereas
those who spoke only English accounted for only 20% in 2000. After 10 years
, the percentage of second
and third
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third-language
language
speakers rose slightly by 5% from 70% to 70% and from 10% to 15% respectively.
Spanish was the most common second
language
spoken by the students
in the
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years
, accounting for 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010. Similarly
, the proportion of British
students
who spoke a second
language
apart from French, German, Spanish
rose gently from 15% in 2000 to 20% in 2010. Correct word choice
and Spanish
While
the percentage of Brutish students
who spoke French indicated a decline by
5% in 2010, there was a period of stability at 10% in the number of German speakers over the 10-year period.Change preposition
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