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Which would you choose a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

#job #hours #time #friends #choice
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 with, nowadays the
job
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 market is very competitive and it is not that easy to find a decent
job
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 with a good salary. So, I prefer a high-paying
job
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 with limited
time
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 for my personal relationships over a lower-paying
job
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 with more free
time
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. First and foremost, normally most people begin their careers at the age of 20 and tend to retire after 55
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.
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, we only have a limited
time
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 period to work and earn in order to lead a comfortable life with our families and friends.
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, I may not be physically and mentally fit to perform a
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 after a certain age , so it is essential to work hard when I am able to do so. Even though, many would say that money is not everything, in order to feed my family and cover their basic expenses financial stability is essential.
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, I would like to choose a higher-paying
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 with long hours because I can earn a lot in a shorter period of
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 compared to a lower-paying career with shorter hours.
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, if I receive a monthly salary of $1000 from an upper-scale company and if I signed the contract for only 3
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, I'll be getting a sum of $36,000 during my tenure
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 if I select a
job
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 which pays me only $500 per month, it will take 6 long
years
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 for me to obtain the same amount of $36,000. Since I only have good 20-25
years
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 to earn, I prefer working hard when I'm capable and enjoying the rest of my life in a relaxed manner with my loved ones.
To conclude
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, I would like to select a highly paid
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 with limited free
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due to
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 the above reasons rather than spending my youth lazily with more personal
time
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 with family and friends.
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