The line graph gives information in proportions about the changing pattern of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.There are 4 indicators CD player,Mobile phone,Home computer and Interner access.
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The line graph gives information in
proportions
about the changing pattern of domestic Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
access
to modern technology in homes in the UK.There are 4 indicators CD player,Mobile phone,Home computer and Interner
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Internet
access
, broadly speaking it can be clearly seen that all of the lines had a growth.
At the beginning it is evidently
that Replace the word
evident
CD
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the CD
player
had the highest percentage, Fix the agreement mistake
players
furthermore
over the years it was only climbing gradually and reached approximately 80%.Add a comma
,furthermore
Wherease
the internet Correct your spelling
Whereas
access
had the lowest percentage however
it is important to notice that the internet Add a comma
,however
access
started later than the other ones moreover
it had only rocketed considerably and doubled from 20% to around 40%.There is
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are
also
lines of the home computer and the mobile phone.The percentage of home computer
had a Fix the agreement mistake
computers
steadily
rise Change the word
steady
although
at the end
it falled
from Correct your spelling
fell
the
second place to Correct article usage
apply
the
third.The mobile phone had a rapid increase through the years and jumped from Correct article usage
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the
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last
place in 1996 to the
second place in 2003 with about 70%.Correct article usage
apply
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