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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disavdantages to living in a house compared with living in an apartment

#people #house #apartment #disavdantages
When people appeared on earth human beings strived to save their lives and satisfy their living needs. Corresponding to archaeology science in the primary stage of human development people were trying to find food and their lifestyle was similar to monkeys. Dealing with and facing challenging issues that situations in daily life human brains had been improved and
also
 increased the volume and mass of it. After the conceivable development of humans , they started to look for some places to habit and live they were caves and it established the roots of modern houses. Modernization and the increasing population of the world brought many problems related to human life. One problem is related to houses and apartments.
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