The charts below show the percentage of water u sed for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The following charts illustrate the percentage of
water
used for 3 different purposes in six different areas of the world.
Overall
, it has three different used water
areas such
as industrial, agricultural, and domestic. The maximum used areas are industrial in four countries apart from North America and Europe.
To begin
with, In the industrial area, the maximum used water
is Central Asia with 88% and the second and third place are in order Africa and Southeast Asia with 84% and 81%. The next country is South America with 77%. The minimum used water
is 39% and 32% in order by North America and Europe.
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