The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and

equipment used in the cement making process,

and how cement is used to produce concrete for

building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams depict the process and tools used in
cement
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production and how
cement
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is used to make concrete for construction purposes.
Overall
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, it is evident that manufacturing
cement
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requires 5 main stages which begin with the collection of limestone and clay and end with bagging the
cement
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. It
also
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is seen that concrete production involves 4 main processes.
To begin
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with, raw materials
such
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as limestone and clay are collected into a crusher which breaks them down into a
powder
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.
Furthermore
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, the
powder
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is been placed into a
mixer
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which thoroughly mixes
powder
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clay and limestone together.
Then
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the mixture is moved through a tube which connects the
mixer
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to the rotating heat which applies heat
at the end
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of the tube. When the
powder
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gets into the rotating heat is delivered to the
powder
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to make it hot.
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, the
powder
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is poured onto a grinder which grinds the
powder
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to become
cement
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.
Lastly
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, the
cement
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is bagged and packaged.
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, in concrete production the basic raw materials are 15% of
cement
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and 10% of water, these two are put into a concrete
mixer
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. The next stage involves adding 25% of sand and 50% of gravel to the ready-mixed water and
cement
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in the concrete
mixer
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which mixes it together to produce concrete for the building.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, powder, mixer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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