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The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The given chart depicts the proportion of
water
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 used for various intents
such
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 as Industrial, Agriculture, and domestic
use
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 in North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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,
water
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use
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 in Agriculture in
six
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countries
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 is the highest, and Central
Asia
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 is number one among the
six
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countries
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.
Europe
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 is the highest
use
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 of
water
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 for industrial
use
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 and the lowest in Central
Asia
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. Domestic
use
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 of
water
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 in
six
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countries
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 is the lowest than other purposes.
To begin
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 with, South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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use
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water
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 for agricultural purposes above 70%. North
America
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 and
Europe
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use
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water
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 for crops under 40%. Industrial
use
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 in North
America
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 and
Europe
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 is above 45%.
In contrast
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, South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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use
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 under 15%. In
six
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countries
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, domestic
water
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use
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 varies, but the percentage is under 20%, lowest than other intents.
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