The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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illustration demonstrates the procedure of making instant noodles for
destribution
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distribution
.
Overall
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, the main ingredient of
this
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product is wheat flour,
although
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they add
a little bit of
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vegetables and spices to get the desired flavour. By combining
with
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it with
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the oil, we can get the
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texture and durability. During the procedure, the flour
which
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apply
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stored in the siles
mixed
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with a relevant amount of water and oil using a mixture, and make dough sheets by
the
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apply
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rollers.
Then
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these cut
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strips and
make
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discs which
combined
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are combined
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with cooking oil and allow to dry. After
that
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the dried goods
put
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in to
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into
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the
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a
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cup
salong
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along
with the vegetables and spices. As the final step sealing of the containers and
lebelling
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labelling
take place
,
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and
prepare
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preparation
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for
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distribution
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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