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The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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These six pie charts depict the proportion of aqua used for industrial, agricultural and domestic reasons on five continents, whereby
Asia
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 is
further
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 segregated into central and southern regions. Immediately, it is recognizable that
overall
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, the greatest demand for
water
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 was for agronomic applications,
whereas
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 the lowest need was in the domestic sector. Observing the pies in more detail, as can be witnessed clearly from the information provided in the illustration, that Africa
as well as
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 central and Southeast
Asia
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 used
water
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 mostly for farming at over 80 % of the total.
In addition
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, the use of
water
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 for industry and households was similar between Africa and Central
Asia
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,
however
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, South East
Asia
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 utilised distinctly more aqua for manufacturing applications at 12%.
Conversely
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, the request for
water
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 in North America and Europe was approximately for industrial utilisation at around half of the total. Both continents were alike in their agricultural and domestic consumption with about one-third for the former, and 15 % for the latter. South America,
on the other hand
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, was slightly unique when compared to the other five regions, about three-quarters of
water
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 was used for farming and nearly a fifth for domestic. In Summary, it is evident that the primary use of
water
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 was globally for cultivation, followed by industry and least of all for the household; as well the demand for
water
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 in each of these sectors varies significantly.
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