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percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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the given charts illustrate the amount of
water
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 which was used by different parts for specific aims in six particular zone in the world.
according to
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 the charts, in North
America
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, the industrial item used the maximum quantity of
water
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 which is a little less than half
while
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 in South
America
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، the greatest quantity belongs to the agricultural
sector
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, less than three fourth. In North
America
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, the agricultural
part
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 and domestic
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used
water
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 which is 13% and 39% .
in contrast
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, in South
America
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, the utilization of the industrial
sector
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 is 10% and the
water
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used by the domestic
part
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 was less than one-fifth. in ,Europe the peak of use belongs to the industrial
part
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 which is more than half. After that agricultural and domestic parts used
water
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 which is 32% and one-fourth per cent. in ,Africa agricultural utilisation is at the top , 84%.total used of domestic and industrial sectors is less than one-fifth. the
consumption
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 of
water
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 in central
Asia
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 in comparison with South East
Asia
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,the biggest amount of expenditure belongs to the agricultural
sector
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, which is 88% and 81%. domestic section
consumption
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 at both of them is the same amount which is 7% and in the industrial ,
part
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 the
consumption
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 is one-twentieth and a little more than one-tenth per cent.
overall
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 , among these areas , the maximum of
water
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 used in the industrial
sector
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 belongs to Europe and North
America
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while
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 the lowest of it is in central
Asia
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. In,addition the maximum of
water
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 used in the agricultural
part
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 is in central
Asia
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. in the domestic ,
part
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 the largest and minimum
consumption
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 is in South
America
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 and South East
Asia
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.
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