A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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country

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the opportunity

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cultural exchange and

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to make a

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money.

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places which do not require much investment, like historical buildings and natural science are came to make a

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money and

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to the rebuild and mounting. The influx of tourists contributes to boosting the nation`s economy as funds collected through travellers are later used in modifying the infrastructure of

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hotspots.

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, it is clearly evident how Thailand and Maldives are earning predominantly through the travel sector.

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exchange can fix the international relations between countries.

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clear credibility in front of other countries. It is another benefit

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if include that trades across nations become smooth and lucrative.

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recently become popular

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for international holidaymakers because of

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the region observed a significant increase in its exports.

Nevertheless

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tourism

is problematic for the destruction of nature and habitat loss. It is undeniable that the development of the travel industry interfered with nature. In fact, tourist attractions require unspoiled land to construct and develop.

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, they have to occupy new areas in order to build hotels,

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, especially enormous resorts.

Therefore

, the habitat of another species shrinks and compresses to a small number. In

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sense, some animals have to move to new natural land to settle.

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, the worst case is that they could lose their lives in conflict to protect their territory and contribute to the cost of nature. In conclusion, I would give credence that

although

tourism

may have some problems, it has had a massive economic impact throughout the world.