The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.
The given line graph demonstrates U.S. energy consumption by six types of fuel between 1980 and 2030 . Looking from an
overall
perspective , it is evident that petrol and oil , coal and natural gas
the
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most used in
this
country .
By contrast
, the other fuels have
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and are expected to continue rising with the exception of hydropower which will remain stable over the period . Petrol and oil consumption stood at 35
quadrillion
units in 1980 before a slight dip with minor fluctuations around 33
quadrillion
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until approximately 2000 . From that point on , a steadier rise begins
that is
anticipated to reach nearly 50
quadrillion
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by 2030 . The second petrol is coal . There was
not
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change in 1990 and there was
sharp
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increase to 16
quadrillion
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in the prediction year . Natural gas is higher than coal in the first year . After , some oscillation it fell gradually to coal .
However
, three fuels
was
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started
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same place . The use of nuclear power stood at 4
quadrillion
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, before a marginal jump with
small
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fluctuation around 7
quadrillion
end of the year . Solar stayed just under
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5
quadrillion
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.
Moreover
, the
last
is hydropower , there was registered
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in 2030 .
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