Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

Nowadays, people tend to

having

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a

job

before going to

university

or school to better know what they are interested in and want to do in the

future

. So that it has a good benefit to faster know themselves before

study

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.

However

, it

also

has a drawback in the laziness to

study

in

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for

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a higher degree in the

future

. In

this

essay, I will describe the

advantage

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advantages

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and

drawback

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drawbacks

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and explain the reasons below.

For the

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main advantage

by

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of

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having a

job

between school

or

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and

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university

is that it

making

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lets

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that person know what they

want

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wants

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to do in the

future

. Various

of

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people try to find a

job

before

enter

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a

university

to

finding

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what they really

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are interest

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interest

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interested

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in and want to pursue in

the

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their

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future

study

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studies

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.

For instance

, people who do a

barisster

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barrister

barista

job

in

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, in this case,

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this

case that person might know

themself

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apply

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that

subjuct

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subject

subjects

like math or high academic subjects might not suit

thier

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their

job

in the

future

than something like art or something related to what their mind into it.

On the other hand

, taking a

job

during or between

study

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studies

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might make that person lose

a

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focus on what they

study

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are studying

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. As we know

that

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learning are basic need for our world communities and having a good academic might lead you

opportunities

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to opportunities

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than

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rather than

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just having jobs

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apply

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instead

.

For example

,

job

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the job

a job

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might

make

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distraction from going to

study

a minimum standard of the workforce needed

such

as

undergraduate

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an undergraduate

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in the

unversity

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university

. In conclusion, finding a

job

before

enter

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entering

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a

university

or school do have benefit and drawback as I

mention

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mentioned

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it

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apply

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on

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above. So

that

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each way is great but it

depend

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depends

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on what your goal in life is

which

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having a

job

might be great but for those who

not

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are not

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sure studying without having a

job

first might be better ways.