The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures below given
depict
the growth of the Add the particle
to depict
village
of Ryemouth from 1995 to 2023 (present).
Overall
, over the period the village
have
witnessed spectacular alterations with the addition of apartments, Change the verb form
has
house
and a tennis court, which indicates a higher population.
Correct article usage
a house
To begin
with 1995, it can be seen that in the north-east side of the village
were
located farmland and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
forest
park. Correct article usage
a forest
In
the opposite Change preposition
On
site
in two parts of the road were situated 12 houses, 4 of Correct your spelling
side
them
were surrounded separately. Correct pronoun usage
which
Also
, to the south part were constructed 5 shops and fish markets, which were divided by the road. To the south-east
side were located a hotelCorrect your spelling
southeast
,
and a café. Remove the comma
apply
In
the south coast of the Change preposition
On
village
worked a fishing port.
Furthermore
, with
the present, it is described that forest Change preposition
in
park
and farmland have been removed and replaced Fix the agreement mistake
parks
to
golf and tennis court. In the Change preposition
with
north-west
Correct your spelling
northwest
have
appeared the new road and 3 more houses. Turning to the south part of the map, it can be noticed that restaurants and apartments have been constructed Unnecessary verb
apply
instead
of shops, fish
markets. Correct word choice
and fish
In
the east side have built a car park and Change preposition
On
fishing
port have been totally demolished. Café still stands in its place.Correct article usage
the fishing
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