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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr Jose, I, Livia James, would like to inform you about the delay in moving to the ABC apartment on 15th July
due to
 some medical issues.
Although
 I have planned to shift to the new place alone,
due to
 unforeseeable circumstances, my plans got delayed. My mother got ill and she requires surgery immediately.
Furthermore
, my previous employer extended the notice period.
As a result
, I have to complete my duties and responsibilities within the stipulated time.
Hence
, it would be difficult for me to shift to the new apartment on the aforementioned date.
Thus
, it would be commendable if you could take
this
 matter into your kind consideration. I would be grateful if you could prepare an agreement letter with the new proposed date, which is likely to be in August. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience. Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely, Livia James
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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