Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

There is a controversy about setting the legal

age

to

drink

. Some

countries

have been imposing law enforcement to set the legal

age

for

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while

some

countries

do not. In

this

essay, I will demonstrate both sides and express my opinion. To commence with, some

countries

impose legal

age

for drinking to avoid children and teenagers becomes alcoholics. The crux is that alcohol is addictive and hazardous to human health, which can cause heart

attack

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and liver diseases. Compare to adults, children and teenagers are less mature to determine the amount of alcohol they can intake daily.

As a result

, they are addicted to drinking easily and unconsciously. Based on

this

assumption, in turn, law enforcement is strictly enacted in some

countries

to halt youngsters from being alcoholics. On the other side, some

countries

do not impose strict policies to limit people from drinking based on the

right

of

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freedom

. In many democratic

countries

, everyone can buy alcohol with no limitation despite

of

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age

under an open culture. It is ubiquitous that people have the

right

of

freedom

to buy drinks and other goods and products. People,

however

, should

also

bear the risks or responsibilities of abusing the

right

of

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freedom

if they cannot manage themselves.

For example

, youngsters may need to bear the risk of being alcoholics if they cannot limit the amount of

drink

they can

drink

daily. Under

this

assumption,

countries

may follow their tradition of

freedom

and no legislation was imposed for drinking at the legal

age

. In my opinion, no law enforcement is required to limit youngsters from drinking as we have the

right

of

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freedom

. We should provide an open environment for everyone to determine whether they can

drink

or not. Never should we deprive one's

right

of

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freedom

. Let's work hand-in-hand to create an open culture!