Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

There is a controversy about setting the legal

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drink

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. Some

countries

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have been imposing law enforcement to set the legal

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some

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do not. In

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essay, I will demonstrate both sides and express my opinion. To commence with, some

countries

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impose legal

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for drinking to avoid children and teenagers becomes alcoholics. The crux is that alcohol is addictive and hazardous to human health, which can cause heart

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and liver diseases. Compare to adults, children and teenagers are less mature to determine the amount of alcohol they can intake daily.

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, they are addicted to drinking easily and unconsciously. Based on

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assumption, in turn, law enforcement is strictly enacted in some

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to halt youngsters from being alcoholics. On the other side, some

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do not impose strict policies to limit people from drinking based on the

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freedom

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. In many democratic

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, everyone can buy alcohol with no limitation despite

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under an open culture. It is ubiquitous that people have the

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to buy drinks and other goods and products. People,

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bear the risks or responsibilities of abusing the

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if they cannot manage themselves.

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, youngsters may need to bear the risk of being alcoholics if they cannot limit the amount of

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they can

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daily. Under

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assumption,

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may follow their tradition of

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and no legislation was imposed for drinking at the legal

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. In my opinion, no law enforcement is required to limit youngsters from drinking as we have the

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. We should provide an open environment for everyone to determine whether they can

drink

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or not. Never should we deprive one's

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. Let's work hand-in-hand to create an open culture!