The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
These pie charts depict the proportion of adult working
time
spent on a variety of activities in a particular nation between 1958 and 2008. It is clear from the graph that the percentages of all activities have increased except sleeping rates and Use synonyms
also
going out figures.
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According to
what is shown, In 1958 we can see 33% of Linking Words
time
spent on work which is represented the most thing consumed Use synonyms
time
. And, sleeping came after with 32 per Use synonyms
cent
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while
hanging out with friends or family nearly a fifth of the Linking Words
time
. And, stay at home spend 8 per Use synonyms
cent
, other hobbies or doing exercise represented 6% of the Use synonyms
time
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whereas
travel to work needs insignificant which is 2 per Linking Words
cent
only.
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Moreover
, in 2008 as we can see the rate of Linking Words
time
expend increased by 42% and relaxing at home decreased to 13 per Use synonyms
cent
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While
, other interests or playing sports increased with insignificant and being 8% Linking Words
also
going out declined and represented at 6% Linking Words
although
, the Linking Words
time
needed to go to work increased not that match as we can see it is 8 per-Use synonyms
cent
and sleeping spend rate decreased and reached 25%.
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To sum up
, we could say that Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
-consuming in working represented nearly half in 2008 and sleeping declined compared with 1958.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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