The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
These pie charts depict the proportion of adult working
time
spent on a variety of activities in a particular nation between 1958 and 2008. It is clear from the graph that the percentages of all activities have increased except sleeping rates and also
going out figures.
According to
what is shown, In 1958 we can see 33% of time
spent on work which is represented the most thing consumed time
. And, sleeping came after with 32 per cent
while
hanging out with friends or family nearly a fifth of the time
. And, stay at home spend 8 per cent
, other hobbies or doing exercise represented 6% of the time
whereas
travel to work needs insignificant which is 2 per cent
only.
Moreover
, in 2008 as we can see the rate of time
expend increased by 42% and relaxing at home decreased to 13 per cent
. While
, other interests or playing sports increased with insignificant and being 8% also
going out declined and represented at 6% although
, the time
needed to go to work increased not that match as we can see it is 8 per-cent
and sleeping spend rate decreased and reached 25%.
To sum up
, we could say that the
Correct article usage
apply
time
-consuming in working represented nearly half in 2008 and sleeping declined compared with 1958.Submitted by jqanber4 on
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