There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Mr Smith: I am writing to complain about the bus service problems in our area. I used to love taking buses in your company, but I recently discovered that some of them often got delayed. I take
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While
I only needed to wait for at most 4 minutes to board my bus in the past,
this
waiting time became 12 minutes on average during
this
week.
This
will, of course, negatively affect my life. The most serious impact is that I can no longer rely on
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Due to
the dramatic growth of the waiting time, I have to drive to my firm by my car.
Although
this
is still feasible, my expenses for
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to work will rise from 5 dollars to 15 dollars per trip if I decide to use my own vehicle. In
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light of that, I would like you to carefully check over all issues with the buses, especially
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purchase more buses and hire more bus drivers. Please tell me how you would handle the problem. Sincerely,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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