Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the modern world,
cars
are very increased in every place of the world and the total is very rapid over the past thirty years so, in every , nation there has a big
problem
with
traffic
jams
. In my ,
opinion
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I agree with
this
topic. In
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essay I will discuss the
problem
of
traffic
jams
because of the many
cars
on the
road
. First of all, in many nations that there are have many
cars
on the street there will have trouble on the
road
,
for example
, accidents that can make a
traffic
jam and many people do not respect the laws so, they will make a bad
problem
on the
road
.
On the other hand
, someone thinks
that is
very important and makes our
life
easier and many people need to use the
car
for family and work. And there think that person is safer than
transportation
and they do not need to wait for
transportation
which can make them save time.
Therefore
, the
car
is very good for their
life
.
Moreover
,
cars
are very important for everyone's
life
, but many
cars
can make
traffic
jams
and be dangerous on the
road
so, I think the government should think about it and try to solve
this
problem
such
as governments should develop
transportation
and support or promote about
transportation
for people.
To sum up
, I totally agree that a
car
is very beneficial for everyone because the
car
can be made our
life
easy and it is very comfortable. But, many
cars
can make trouble on the
road
,not of
traffic
jams
but because many
cars
can make a bad environment and others. So, It is very important to think about it and try to solve
this
problem
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • commute times
  • pollution
  • car purchases
  • fuel prices
  • congestion charges
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • subsidies
  • incentives
  • electric vehicles
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • cycling
  • walking
  • dedicated lanes
  • pathways
  • sustainable options
  • educational campaigns
  • environmental impacts
  • health impacts
  • behavioral change
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